What were your main objectives for your presentation in this activity?
Get people to join my wait-list and contact me if they have any feedback and suggestions
What have you improved since your last presentation in the previous activity?
One goal that I had was to talk about myself and I made sure to do that, but unfortunately I don’t think I introduced myself in the best way. I didn’t show people why I’m working on orbit. I don’t think I sold myself during that presentation. I should have been spent some more time on my background and the struggles I faced and how I now how I’m trying to help people who face the struggles I had
What did you do well in this presentation?
I’m kind of proud of myself for finishing on the 8 minute Mark. I did start off slow but managed to pick up the pace in the second half
What needs improvement in your presentation?
There were some points during the presentation where I used filler words and didn’t fully explain something clearly. I would like to reduce these occurrences. It becomes especially bad when it impacts The flow of the presentation which is another thing I’m trying to get better at
What are the key points of feedback you received from your instructor, TAs, or peers?
A lot mentioned the fact that I was moving a lot and that was good in their opinion. I actually wanted to move more and farther but I had to go back and switch the slides so it would have been good to have an assistant or a slide controller in my hand
Do you agree or disagree with the feedback you got? Explain why.
It was generally good remarks. One feedback I got was to speak louder. I appreciated that reminder because I naturally speak with medium volume but I have to put effort to get that extra 10% of volume which was needed in this case
Based on this experience, what specific goal(s) will you set for your next presentation?
I generally want to make my presentations more interactive and make my audience think